This style reminds me of an old ballad, but now its about the Doctor! The rhyming scheme that you wrote was one of the first things that caught my attention.
You didn't fully let the audience "relax"--so to speak--at the end of the first half. You kept me wondering how you were going to complete that rhyme and still keep the flowing rhythm, and you pleasantly surprised me as I came to the end of the verse. It was very well done.
The brief account from the point of view from the Companion was really neat to think about, and I'm glad you made it that way. I also liked how you mentioned the various aliens into the second verse, and the little chorus was very charming.
You didn't fully let the audience "relax"--so to speak--at the end of the first half. You kept me wondering how you were going to complete that rhyme and still keep the flowing rhythm, and you pleasantly surprised me as I came to the end of the verse. It was very well done.
The brief account from the point of view from the Companion was really neat to think about, and I'm glad you made it that way. I also liked how you mentioned the various aliens into the second verse, and the little chorus was very charming.
Overall, nicely done.
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